Monday, December 5, 2011

argument: girls can play football

assertion:
  • girls should be able to play football

evidence-concrete detail:
  • equality, girls should have the same rights in sports as girls
    • commentary 1: " can throw a perfect spiral, and punt farther then most guys can." if a girl can play better or just as good as the guys they should get the rights to play.
    • commentary 2:women fought for our rights of equality a long time ago, and won. we have the same rights as any male in the us.To vote, to drive, and to play football if we so choose.  
  • The guys say we are girls. we are not as tough, or as strong as they are
    • If i worked out as much as the guys on the football team i could be as strong as they are.
    •  How tough a girl is is a mind set, if she wants to be as tough as the guys she can be.

opposing claims/ they say:
  • girls don't have the skill, and arnt tough enough to play football
my rebuttal:
  •  given the chance and the lessen to play we could have the skill, and any girl can be as tough as any guy.
my paragraph:
  • equality, girls should have the same rights in sports as girls "can throw a perfect spiral, and punt farther then most guys can." if a girl can play better or just as good as the guys they should get the rights to play. women fought for our rights of equality a long time ago, and won. we have the same rights as any male in the us.To vote, to drive, and to play football if we so choose.  The guys say we are girls. we are not as tough, or as strong as they areIf i worked out as much as the guys on the football team i could be as strong as they are. How tough a girl is is a mind set, if she wants to be as tough as the guys.

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