argument: girls can play football

assertion:

• girls should be able to play football

evidence-concrete detail:

• equality, girls should have the same rights in sports as girls
• commentary 1: " can throw a perfect spiral, and punt farther then most guys can." if a girl can play better or just as good as the guys they should get the rights to play.
• commentary 2:women fought for our rights of equality a long time ago, and won. we have the same rights as any male in the us.To vote, to drive, and to play football if we so choose.  
• The guys say we are girls. we are not as tough, or as strong as they are
• If i worked out as much as the guys on the football team i could be as strong as they are.
•  How tough a girl is is a mind set, if she wants to be as tough as the guys she can be.

opposing claims/ they say:

• girls don't have the skill, and arnt tough enough to play football

my rebuttal:

•  given the chance and the lessen to play we could have the skill, and any girl can be as tough as any guy.

my paragraph:

• equality, girls should have the same rights in sports as girls "can throw a perfect spiral, and punt farther then most guys can." if a girl can play better or just as good as the guys they should get the rights to play. women fought for our rights of equality a long time ago, and won. we have the same rights as any male in the us.To vote, to drive, and to play football if we so choose.  The guys say we are girls. we are not as tough, or as strong as they areIf i worked out as much as the guys on the football team i could be as strong as they are. How tough a girl is is a mind set, if she wants to be as tough as the guys.

war is.....

War is a blood bath, protecting our rights and freedoms
War is the attack of someone else, killing and destroying what they stand for
War is a constant reminder to be that full for what we have, remembering that other people are not as lucky as us
War is a power struggle, in which some will has to end up winning
War is the bravery of Strong men and women, fighting for what the believe in
War is people losing loved ones, morning over the lost
War is strategy, planning every move to try to win
War is a battle with faith, praying everyday that your loved one comes home
War is standing strong as a country, being smart, standing up for what we love
War is loss, devastating others

rembering 9/11

9/11 was a tragity in the nation. It affected all people, in our nation, and other countrys. i rember how it affected me, and my family. people lost there lives, and many people lost there loved ones. our nation has coming back stronger, and i think it is wonderfull that we are rebuilding the trade centers, it Shows our countries strength and unity. "united we stand"